The eyes look good, really seductive, but the rest of the face could use more expression. I like the placement of the hands, but maybe you could work the rest of both of your arms into the picture a little more. I know you probably wanted to display your chest nicely, but I think you have nice arms, and it would've been nice to see your elbows maybe a little close in? Idk, I'm not a professional, but there it is.
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